I'm starting to repost my Goodreads book reviews here.
Murder Most Unladylike
Wednesday, October 25, 2017
Monday, October 16, 2017
This is the opening of the third book in my Crystal Odyssey series, now called Beyond the Sea. What can I do so it grabs the readers more?
People,
horses, and wagons crowded the vast entryway of the Stronghold. The
day had arrived for the start of our next adventure. I'd looked
forward to this for so long that it was almost anticlimactic to
actually be embarking for home and then Fartek.
We
saddled our steeds and stowed our packs, mounted and took one last
look at the people and the place we were leaving behind, and then
Oskar opened the entry so we could file out.
The
last weeks at the Stronghold we prepared for the journey to Fartek.
Katya and Mai made good progress in deciphering Madoc's books, the
main object of our trek, using what we found in the fallen satellite
at the bottom of Dulno Lake.
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